Frightened, the hiker went up the slippery mountain and then he finally got to the top and looked at the view and it was so cool. He set up a tent because he was shivering cold and he was so scared in case he would suffer from hypothermia. He took out his sleeping bag, his very warm clothes to wear so that he can be warm. It was an awesome experience for the climber.
marhabaan (Hello) Muhennad, great work on your story. The title goes well with the story. The word Frightened is a great ED word to start a story! Well done Muhennad!
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Alofa
Hello Muhennad,great work on your story it really stands out. I like the way that you told us what he felt and where he was in the story. The title goes good with your story. I also like how you used frightened in the beggining of your story.
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