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This is  my Coin Operated That I did with my class we had to see a video to copy from the details. 

Ted and his mum went for a walk down the street with his toy rocket in his hand.

Ted saw a rocket coin operator that he likes because he is so into  rockets.

 Ted went in and put a coin and buckle.

Ted press the button and goes up and fall down he was angry.

He sow a lemon and then makes a lemonade stand and gets a lot coins for the rocket and then goes for his deems.

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here is the video.