The Present
Mum walked into the house putting a present in front of me, opened the curtains, and as she walked to the kitchen told me to open the gift. She had a phone call so she took it upstairs. I was thinking I should open it. I opened it and it was a puppy. It jumped out, I held it up and saw it had three legs. I threw it on the floor, but it started to play. Then he found a ball and gave it to me to throw. So, I got my crutches and took him outside to play.
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This is what I did with 100 words for a story called The present. I watched a short film and then wrote the story. I found it hard because I usually write more.
Do you think that you could leave a PTQ comment using only 50 words?
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Hi Muhennad Tui here, I think that I can write a 50 word comment and I like your present writing because it is better than my and is stunning and click my blog out at https://odstuif.blogspot.com/ blog ya later Tui.
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